Stride after stride I tread, Breath after breath I take
The Sun dawns, and serene’s lake
Flowers stop their sway, wind lost its way
Thoughts aren’t gay, Heart’s not making any hay
Long way to go, the destination is still at bay
Miles to travel, before calling it a day
Like a beautiful dream, here he comes
With him comes, a gush of flutters
Eyes shy away , heart thaws
He shines, a volcano of happiness erupts
Flowers bloom, and the Lake is all silver
The sky is dark, yet the path so clear
Long way to go, the destination isn’t near
But the Journey’s now dear, with my “Full Moon” here !
This one is beautiful Haritha! Whoever you wrote it for, is a lucky man! I loved the last 2 lines....read them 5 times! Good job. I'm sure you will get better and better if you continue writing!
ReplyDeleteA very good start. Romantic poem. Try to explore more topics and keep writing.
ReplyDeleteWow..
ReplyDeleteABBBABBABBABBA, KEKA, THURUMU, RACHA, Pindesev!! :D
ReplyDeleteseriously, last two lines, as deepak says, are AAAAWWWWWEEEESOMEEE!!!
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful Poem...!
ReplyDeleteThe 'Journey' you have embarked upon is aptly surmised in your own lines "Miles to travel, before calling it a day"
Keep going on the wonderful journey of writing, the scenes are picturesque, dont even think of calling it a day... for we look forward to more!!
Kudos!
WoooooooW!! Simple and Beautiful............ Loved It.
ReplyDeleteSuper!:)
ReplyDeleteNice one remembers me of the last words written by Nehru, Miles and miles to go before I sleep...
ReplyDeleteAhhhh!!! very nice poem ..loved every line
ReplyDeletefantastic job Harithaa
Like a beautiful dream, here he comes
With him comes, a gush of flutters
Eyes shy away , heart thaws
He shines, a volcano of happiness erupts
What a line "Flowers stop their sway, wind lost its way,Thoughts aren’t gay, Heart’s not making any hay",Beautifully written Haritha.Keep up the good work....more and more to come from you ..Cheers!!!
ReplyDeleteNot writing more?
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